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Beautiful Monster

Beautiful Monster

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Natasha By Lisamarie468 Updated Jan 06, 2014

Evelyn is given a dare, go into the supposedly haunted house. Easy right, not so much as Evelyn soon discovers as she wanders around the house and finds stranger and stranger things. Eventually coming face to face with a mysterious man named Asmodeus, claiming that he's taking her to Hell. Evelyn's world is turned upside down when she learns that Asmodeus is a prince of Hell who embodies the sin of Lust.  Just what are this man's intentions? Will Evelyn only be allowed to leave when the roads of Hell are paved with ice?

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Well,if the only and one condition was to enter in the house,for all the holy"you should enter and get the hell out there"whats wrong with you,chick?
Pearl_Adams Pearl_Adams Sep 15, 2016
'Beware, You Are In For A Scare'. . . . . Goosebumps, anybody? R.L Stine?!
No. No. Logic, woman! Use common sense! If you can go inside an abandoned house that easily then everyone else can do that too! There's definitely, maybe not a ghost, but a homeless, a killer might be living there!!!!
DixonChick DixonChick Mar 06, 2015
wow! a hot guy is in anabondon house and of course he is only there to take her to hell!
southern_chic_cat southern_chic_cat Nov 02, 2014
hey! at least they put a sign on the door....they didn't have to do warm and fuzzy
potatoeswrite potatoeswrite Nov 06, 2013
I don't normally comment but this is a great story and I'm really glued to it so please update it and finish it. Thanks for your original ideas :)