Beautiful Monster

Beautiful Monster

262K Reads 3.9K Votes 39 Part Story
Natasha By Lisamarie468 Updated Jan 06, 2014

Evelyn is given a dare, go into the supposedly haunted house. Easy right, not so much as Evelyn soon discovers as she wanders around the house and finds stranger and stranger things. Eventually coming face to face with a mysterious man named Asmodeus, claiming that he's taking her to Hell. Evelyn's world is turned upside down when she learns that Asmodeus is a prince of Hell who embodies the sin of Lust.  Just what are this man's intentions? Will Evelyn only be allowed to leave when the roads of Hell are paved with ice?

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Pearl_Adams Pearl_Adams Sep 15
'Beware, You Are In For A Scare'. . . . . Goosebumps, anybody? R.L Stine?!
DixonChick DixonChick Mar 06, 2015
wow! a hot guy is in anabondon house and of course he is only there to take her to hell!
southern_chic_cat southern_chic_cat Nov 02, 2014
hey! at least they put a sign on the door....they didn't have to do that....so.....Yea....feel warm and fuzzy
potatoeswrite potatoeswrite Nov 06, 2013
I don't normally comment but this is a great story and I'm really glued to it so please update it and finish it. Thanks for your original ideas :)
LordLoki LordLoki Aug 12, 2012
nice story. ill add to  library and finish the rest when i get back from in town. i voted a few paraghraphs in cause i saw it was already good enogh.
xXdemolitionloverXx xXdemolitionloverXx Oct 25, 2011
wow... intense. I'm liking it. That was a very unique start.