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551 Reads 4 Votes 10 Part Story
Kay By starryeyes Updated Feb 04, 2011

Daniel is at last getting used to being a normal teen in the U.S, not the-always traveling son of amdassadors. His parents were killed two years ago. assasinated.  Now his life spins out of controll agen when a long lost sister is found.  Can Daniel find his sister, and keep his friends alive too?

MommyMagic MommyMagic Feb 14, 2011
Good beginning!  My students just walked in.  Looking forward to reading more!
TaintedDaisies TaintedDaisies Feb 06, 2011
fantastic. vvv she's only thirteen and is dyslexic. cut her a break. (: 
paigemae23 paigemae23 Jan 21, 2011
A couple of spelling mistakes but I can't spell either and I don't realy thing spelling matters as long as the writing is good - which it was :). I liked the ideas you have there and the cliff hanger was good. X
december_girl december_girl Jan 15, 2011
I like this, but there are a couple of spelling mistakes that just make it seem a little less sophisticated
                              
                              calcuas - calculus
                              strait - straight
                              Aferca - Africa
                              Sience - Science
                              twordes - towards