!'m a RoCk StAr

!'m a RoCk StAr

23K Reads 203 Votes 20 Part Story
Cora Star By CoraStar_ Completed

April is a smart, talent,  outgoing, high school student. No one knows she's one of the worlds most famous rockstars. With her best friends at her side they go to school like regular eighteen year olds. April has the best life, but love has another story. Damon, shows up into her perfect life, and has a secret too. Rock it in with April with her ways of a destructive, humorous, sarcastic teen.

CoraStar_ CoraStar_ Jan 10, 2011
Thanks ill keep it in mind ima switch to character after character soon but mainly I was thinking authors view overall but thanks!!! I appreciate ur comment :)
BlackInkHeart BlackInkHeart Jan 10, 2011
This is pretty good. If you want my honest opinion I'd think it would be better if you had it from someones actually point of view. That's just how I am. I like to get the feel of the character. But otherwise it's good. :) Keep going!
CoraStar_ CoraStar_ Jan 09, 2011
Lmfao lol yeah sorry just noticed it right now going to fix it