Elementals (Paused)

Elementals (Paused)

2.6K Reads 47 Votes 4 Part Story
Erin Jane Moore By ErinJM Updated Jan 16, 2011

His last word was for Lyra, his seven-year-old daughter, to be locked from the light. She was stowed away in her bedroom for the next ten years. He died the night he gave his last wish, and all she wants to do is escape it. When Lyra does she has no idea what is after her. Old letters start to make sense once she meets the rare subjects, Elementals. Even on different sides, hating each other, nobody to trust, they find something. That one thing is a legacy of six people. The game changes. Lyra is pushed back to the palace. She can't play her part for the world. Lyra is one of them.

InspireMe InspireMe Jan 22, 2011
Ooooo this is very interesting......
                              
                              How does Ripple know Lyra is a Darin though? Was she basically told in that dream? Is that part of her powers?
                              
                              Anyways, I like it. :) Very mysterious and interesting....
InspireMe InspireMe Jan 22, 2011
This is really interesting and very well written! Off to read more!
                              
                              You know, when I was younger I always wanted to control the elements. I actually tried writing a story on it once, but I was so young it was pretty bad. xD This is much better.
Rachel24601 Rachel24601 Jan 10, 2011
Good job!  You really were able to draw me into the story, and I look forward to the next upload.  There were a few typos, but not nearly as bad as what I often see on Wattpad.  All in all, I'm glad I read what you have thus far.
CeeKay CeeKay Jan 09, 2011
I loved it. You have AWESOME descriptions! I am curious to see what the Elementals are. SOOO you know what that means!! POST A NEW CHAPTER QUICK!!!