Suicidal Dancers

Suicidal Dancers

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R Y A N By -MissyR_ Updated Feb 08

After waking up in an upside down world full of crazy creatures, confusing abilities, and new people, 17 year old, Iris Windsfield, comes to learn she's dead and has been chosen to become a Suicidal Dancer, a special being sent to stop people from taking their lives. 




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-MissyR_ -MissyR_ Oct 15, 2016
Thank you so much for your feedback and tips!! I will surely read more as you've suggested. I really appreciate this!!! Honestly. <3 thank you.
ThatGreyGirl ThatGreyGirl Oct 15, 2016
You can't feel your heart. You can feel your heart beating though.
ThatGreyGirl ThatGreyGirl Oct 15, 2016
There shouldn't be a comma after 'feeling'. Also, it should be 'do' instead of 'did' because she's talking in present here. (:
ScarletBays ScarletBays Oct 13, 2016
Okay... That was INTENSE! It's like I can feel it happen O_o My Word!
Greyoblivion Greyoblivion Oct 14, 2016
I'm at the edge right now ugh. Now I really want to read this
Writer17x Writer17x Oct 12, 2016
This gave me chills! What a spectacular opening to the story 👀👀👀❤