Some Deals Are Meant To Be Broken..............a short-short story

Some Deals Are Meant To Be Broken..............a short-short story

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Nikki Dee By NikkiDee Completed

Nicole, a newly divorce', has feelings for her best friend's brother.  The very first night they met, the club was jumping, shots were done, and deals were made............ As soon as the mother of his twin boys come back into the picture, someone breaks the deal......  He caught my chin with his fingers and made me look at him.  Dam those dark sea blue eyes. "Now that I got your attention, Nicole..........spill.  I want to know everything and I mean everything, now.  I'm not leaving here until we have dealt with whatever is going on with you..........us. Neither one of us is moving from this couch until we both have re-finalized this deal."  He closed his eyes and tried to ignore his phone vibrating.  "Answer the phone Drake, it might be important."  "No."  he said.  "It might be Anna."  Once again, he said "No".  The phone stopped.  But as soon as I opened my mouth to finally tell him, his phone ranged again.  "Please answer the phone, it's obviously important.  It could even be Lori looking for you."  His head turned to me so quickly, I thought he would get whiplash.  "So that's what's this is all about?!  Who told you she was back?" he said with an agitated voice.  I said nothing but looked at his phone then said, "answer it and I'll tell you everything if you will answer one question for me, truthfully."  He reached for the phone, and I tried to leave.  As he answered the phone, he yanked me back to my spot on his lap and said loudly for who ever was on the phone to hear, "Stay. Put. Nicole.  If you move from my lap, I will throw this phone against the wall and if it doesn't break, whoever is on the line will hear everything that I will say and do to you.  Do I make myself clear?"  Follow Nicole and Drake as they re-finalize the deal.......        Copyright © 2013 NIKKI DEE All rights reserved.

Recklis Recklis Sep 29, 2013
Haha, Drake sounds like someone I know :P
                              Love the humour and the flow :)  Its great :D
Recklis Recklis Sep 29, 2013
Hey :D Welcome on board as a writer :D  This is awesome so far, and I really hope to be seeing more of your work on here :)  I love the style ;) Xxx