Half-Faye

Half-Faye

28.6K Reads 886 Votes 28 Part Story
E Morscheck By Pranxtor Completed

Florence was born a half-faye, or a halfling to a faery mother and a human father. Her mother left her when she was only four years old leaving her to keep the secret herself. 

As she gets older strange things begin to happen until she is drawn back to her mothers world where she is the only one who can stop a new evil rising.

So....the word butt......speaks a thousand pictures😍😍😍
Sorry to say but Faye as in fairy is spelled as faery or fae
Daking Daking Oct 04, 2012
I you have an interesting idea. I like the fact that you have fairies in your world and that they are not allowed to interact with the human world. I will read in the following chapters how the story will unfold.
meeko228 meeko228 Jan 16, 2012
hey! so sorry this is late but thanks for the dedication!!!! :D
Pranxtor Pranxtor Jan 03, 2012
@connkav thanks XD I try to write as naturally as possible :D
Jessabellx Jessabellx Jan 03, 2012
Sounds interesting (: Definately a gripping prologue, and a hook too. 
                              The only thing I really noticed was your tenses. When you said "what made me really special was" shouldn't it be "what makes me?" Unless she was special but not any more /: 
                              but apart from that this is a really good prologue (: