PERFUME: The Private Doctor

PERFUME: The Private Doctor

1.8K Reads 92 Votes 4 Part Story
URIYULL By uriyull Updated Oct 18

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cover by Marlinda Choi

  • choahra
  • chokyuhyun
  • hwangpanda
  • kimheechul
  • leedonghae
  • leehyoah
  • mystery
  • perfume
  • romance
  • superjunior
  • theprivatedoctor
alf1408 alf1408 Oct 14
Ceritanya bagus kok.. 😉 Lanjut nih, bikin penasaran.. 😂
uriyull uriyull Oct 02, 2016
itu yg bilang 'cho ahra mencarimu', heechul. dia kan lagi teleponan sama hyo ah.
itsautumnkim itsautumnkim Oct 02, 2016
Disini gue rada bingung deh pan, ini si hechul yang teriak apa si hyo ah? Kan yang ketemu sama Ahra Heechul?
itsautumnkim itsautumnkim Oct 02, 2016
Keren! Tapi di part menuju akhir, gue rasa lu mulai goyah deh pan. Setting tempat lu sampe lupa, padahal Hyo ketemu sama Donghae di minimarket, tapi pas perginya lu malah nerangin kalo mereka lagi di cafe 😂
                              But, over all good job pan!
                              Seinget gue, untuk typo gue cuma nemuin tiga kali.