A Case to Solve (Re publishing-Revised Version)

A Case to Solve (Re publishing-Revised Version)

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dreamsunlimited1996 By dreamsunlimited1996 Updated Jan 15

[Highest Ranking : 5 in Mystery/Thriller]


She breathed hard. She looked at the medicines strewn on the road. Tears fell from her eyes. She had to take the medicines to her sister. She tried to get up from the road. A tight slap made her fall again. 

She looked up to see her attacker. The figure was covered in black clothing. She couldn't see the face of that person. In a moment, the figure was above her stomach.

'Please leave me! My sister needs me! She is sick!', the girl pleaded.

'Forget about your sister', a menacing voice said, 'you 're going to die!'

The maniacal tone shocked her. Her eyes caught a glimpse of her attacker 's face. She was shocked.

'You!'

Before another word escaped her, a cloth was stuffed into her mouth. The cloth muffled her screams, when a large knife was thrusted into her chest.

i wanna ask one thing that are the characters same or they have changed too ?
Chechi u have given this a massive makeover which actually is massive as I said earlier. I love to read through it yet again