MY FEISTY LITTLE ONE

MY FEISTY LITTLE ONE

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dladlad By dladlad Updated Jan 10

Cotton is moving to a new town with her three protective brothers not only because she's the only girl but because of her past  she only wants to finish highschool peaceful and alone  but Zach is here to stop all that .

Zach the alpha is her mate but she doesn't even know a thing about werewolves nor the the world of love and friendship.

jodcemack jodcemack Feb 09, 2016
Its best to write who's POV in order not to get the reader confused
12MrsPotatoHead12 12MrsPotatoHead12 Dec 29, 2016
Constructive Criticism: Try to use some more punctuation. It would make the sentences much easier to read and wouldn't give you run-on sentences.