i have 6 mates ?!

i have 6 mates ?!

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foreverlove4486 By foreverlove4486 Completed

this story is about a girl named kelly goldstein. she is a hybrid thats a roughe with her  mother. when she is hunting one day these 6 boys kidnapped her claiming to be her mates .will she soon finally realise that she loves her mates or not find out in the story

Hey Caleb  Caleb turned and said what do you need Caleb and Caleb said did you say something and Caleb was like, nah Caleb but Caleb thought Caleb was joking and hit him
Hopefully they didn't shove "it" into her mouth if you know what I'm saying (dirty joke)
ReignOvr ReignOvr Sep 16
When he said that his powers were to read peoples minds I would have started screaming
CCcallie818 CCcallie818 Oct 29
Just gonna say it need major editing but it's a good story none the less
This story really needs to be edited, and there are a lot of he said
Ummm what...
                              The description had bad spelling but this is why our teachers tell us to use commas