Dragonsbane

Dragonsbane

32.3K Reads 1.7K Votes 21 Part Story
Tasha By TashaDeclawed Completed

When a soldier discovers the Firstborn dragon egg, his life is turned upside down. But as he discovers what it really means to be the Rider of an elemental dragon, he finds himself head over heels in an adventure that not only threatens his own life, but the life of his hatchling as well.

Reptile_Girl Reptile_Girl May 04, 2015
You have very nice descriptions! However, you have a problem that I suffer from as well: the sentences are competing. A few shorter, less complex sentences scattered throughout this paragraph would make it an easier read.
MagentaSenterfitt MagentaSenterfitt Nov 20, 2014
new reader, hi there, I'll poke my head in every now and then and let ya know what I think.  Nothing judgemental I promise you....still hi o/
TARDI5 TARDI5 Jan 27, 2014
OHMIGOD LOVE THE WAY YOU WRITE UGH SO JELLY AND I LOVE THIS BOOK.*gives you all the votes*
emilita emilita Dec 03, 2013
I like your style in writing. Describing the forest worked out very well and the ambassador was very believable. Maybe it's just me but I am sort of confused who the MC is at this point; I'd go with Ralem but may also be Kelly? 
                              
                              Good job! Added this to my reading list :)
TheBlueCaterpillar TheBlueCaterpillar Nov 29, 2013
I really like your metaphors, and you description of the nature and the soldiers feelings are very real.  You have a gift of making words come to life! 
                              I can't wait to read more.
xXDarkestEMOXx xXDarkestEMOXx Nov 13, 2013
I have Read Chapter 1 so Far, Wow this is Amazing, I can Picture Everything and The Detail is Fantastic :D I will Read More when I can.