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The tale of a broken heart

The tale of a broken heart

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Lexi By -Lexxii- Updated Jan 07, 2011

It starts at the end, when all hope is lost. It starts with numbness, with grief, with nothing left but agonising nothingness. The entire story is spilled from one lovers lips. It is heartfelt and deceitful. It is something you cant not read.

-Lexxii- -Lexxii- Jan 16, 2011
@Astragalus Thank you, its really nice to hear what you think. 
                              What kind of mistakes? If you could help it'd be great... 
-Lexxii- -Lexxii- Jan 09, 2011
Some feedback on whether this story is too emo would be nice :P 
                              also, i just realised its kinda similar to the plot behind moulin rouge without the whole moulin rouge thing toit... yeah that made sense.
                              BUT help please :D