Alayna

Alayna

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mohawkguy28@yahoo.com By mohawkguy28 Completed

To Alayna, growing up, with no mom and a dad obsessed with building a time machine life is hard. But being best friends with her cousin, Meril, has helped. She struggles with loss and heartbreak but, thanks to her cousin, she always has help.

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L1meCre L1meCre Feb 06, 2012
Your writing is good but I think it would have been more interesting if I read the sequel first. Also it would be nice if you wrote a description ;)