Alayna

Alayna

2 Part Story 128 Reads 0 Votes
mohawkguy28@yahoo.com By mohawkguy28 Completed

To Alayna, growing up, with no mom and a dad obsessed with building a time machine life is hard. But being best friends with her cousin, Meril, has helped. She struggles with loss and heartbreak but, thanks to her cousin, she always has help.

L1meCre L1meCre Feb 06, 2012 09:15PM
Your writing is good but I think it would have been more interesting if I read the sequel first. Also it would be nice if you wrote a description ;)