Shooting Love (On Hold for Now)

Shooting Love (On Hold for Now)

1.9K Reads 44 Votes 6 Part Story
ShannonW By ShannonW Updated Mar 21, 2012

He was different. She was diiferent. However, they didn't care, they were still bestfriends. Nothing could of tore them apart. Until Alex gets a girlfriend, and tells her that he loves her. Jesse is heartbroken because she loved Alex more then bestfriends. However, as he said they were noting more than bestfriends. She was nothing but a sister. Heartbroken, Jesse flees to Los Angeles from New York to get away from the pain. She has money, she's successful what's more she can ask for. She doesn't want to admit that she's lonely. Until Jesse gets a note from her mother, an invitation to Alex and his girlfriends wedding. Jesse is hesistant to go, but she decides to go. On the night of the wedding, a passing star passes over the reception, and Jesse wishes that she could go back in time. Jesse wants to change what she did more in time. Can she win ALex back? Can she show him that they were meant for eachother? This is her last chance to get Alex back, lets hope she can do it. Find out in Shooting Stars.

  • back
  • bangs
  • bestfriend
  • bestfriends
  • blue
  • buddies
  • car
  • cool
  • crazy
  • different
  • dress
  • falling
  • friends
  • friendship
  • high
  • immature
  • lerman
  • logan
  • love
  • machine
  • man
  • music
  • nyc
  • old
  • romance
  • run
  • school
  • shooting
  • sleeping
  • star
  • sweet
  • time
  • together
  • tree
  • wedding
tyrells tyrells Jan 10, 2012
I love this chapter! It is an excellent length and your dialogue and description was great as well. I noticed quite a few grammar mistakes which needs to be edited but otherwise a very good first chapter!
AwAWinnie AwAWinnie Jan 09, 2012
Ahhhh, I love this story! There's a few grammar mistakes, but so far so good - I've enjoyed it :D
tala_S tala_S Jan 09, 2012
i'm sorry but you really need to edit the grammar ( i don't want to be mean or anything) because your story has great potential , i really enjoyed the first part of to the next :))
crescentmoon108 crescentmoon108 Dec 31, 2011
I agree this story is really good i can't wait to read about Lacy and see if she's really a bit- sorry witch ;D
kiki98 kiki98 Dec 31, 2011
@ShannonW 
                              Um, if you have some facebook twitter etc, you can prmote there!
                              Talk to your friends, and they can support you!
kiki98 kiki98 Dec 31, 2011
A bit of mistakes, but well written! This story can go far if you just keep updating and maybe trying to promote?
                              I like the story plot, it's cute (:
                              Can't wait till the next update !@ShannonW