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Journal to a Tourtured Life

Journal to a Tourtured Life

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Maddie By Aussie32 Updated Feb 16, 2010

When you have lived your life being tortured and abused all you want to do is get away, to run someplace safe, but what happens when you can't find that place no matter where you are.... on a street or in a CIA safe house your never safe.

dreamybanana dreamybanana Feb 16, 2010
Very few mistakes and a lot of structure - this seems like some good quality writing. I just hope you don't try to tell too much of the story just through dialogue conversation as too much isn't very engaging. Still I thought this was quite an interesting read so I hope you write more.