viDESI Love

viDESI Love

7.3K Reads 989 Votes 20 Part Story
T A N Y A By Tanya_agarwall Updated 6 days ago

**** Mission Desi ***
Yaar, seriously a small description can't told what a amazing desi story inside !! So please give it chance 

Bahot dua dungi..

C'mon now start reading 
And yeah let me tell you this is DESI story in VIDESH ..  
So I wrote it in Hinglish (Hindi + English) 
Please mere Indian yaaro give it a chance !!! :)

Highest rank 33rd in Teen Fic

-bhumi- -bhumi- Nov 09
Mangal Murti Moriya 
                              I finally found the one who didn't hesitate to write God name's chant as a starting line.
                              Proud to be Indian 
Socha nhi tha... k wattpad pe english k alava koi language likh paunga
-bhumi- -bhumi- Nov 09
😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂 kamal hai I also did in one of my exam and you got me that feeling again
- - Nov 14
the start looks promising, but I hate to point that that it needs some editing. there are some double periods and the commas look a little off. I apologize for being such a grammar nazi.
-bhumi- -bhumi- Nov 09
😂😂😂😂 that's it man it's like you are writing my story
- - Nov 14
again - double periods. dude you have to straighten out your game before you start. also use some words in English or warn us that it is in hindhi.