The Pharaoh's Dancer (Rewritten/Private Novel)

The Pharaoh's Dancer (Rewritten/Private Novel)

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Sandie Lee-Ellen By Tic_Tok Updated Nov 03

"Do you know what to do, Amunet?" A voice as sweet as silk whispered into the young girl's ear. Amunet didn't look over her shoulder but shifted uncomfortably on her bare feet before nodding her head. A soft hand touched her back and urged her forward. 

All eyes turned towards the girl dressed in transparent linen with her dark hair tumbling down her back and her violet eyes lined by kohl. Every movement caused the jewels on her wrists and ankles to dangle and shimmer in the light.

She raised her head and found the Pharaoh's transfixed stare. His jade eyes narrowed in on hers and the room became still and silent. Amunet bowed and, at the pluck of a harp string, began to dance.

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This is the rewritten version of The Pharaoh's Dancer. It has more detail and content than the original and even though the storyline is the same, the characters are a little different along with some of the events that happen.

The story, apart from chapter 1, will only be available to those who follow me.

(I'll try to update once a week.)

Cover by: @Addietay

This is brilliantly rewritten. I've only just finished your first version and I am already intrigued by this one! Looking forward to more :)
Liv_ely Liv_ely Oct 12
I love this new version! You can immediately see the newer details that have been added and the length of the chapter is much appreciated.
well done! love the amount of detail and the new length of the chapters :) excited for the rest
pawneedr pawneedr Nov 04
I loved the other version of this story. I like this one so far, but I am not sure that you are very dedicated to it? I am growing wary of waiting on updates.