My Mission, A Love Game

My Mission, A Love Game

6.2K Reads 123 Votes 10 Part Story
karen. By xContinuous Updated Jan 26, 2011

17 year old, Carter is still a rookie spy! In order to become a real spy she needs to complete one last mission. The mission is to get Max McCarr to fall in love with her. She wears a blond wig, and acts like a brat just to approach him. Her plan was almost backfired when one of her spy enemies, Drew comes along. He causes chaos, and he also captured Carter's Chief! In order for Carter to get her Chief back, Drew demands that Carter needs to convince him to fall in love with her. It's become a messy love game, and more battles seem to occur. Will Carter fail or succeed to become a real spy? Read to find out!

myjournalrox myjournalrox Jan 27, 2011
I like it so far but you need to ad more detail, it's going to fast and it's making it a bit...iffy.
                              I like it though but just remember to ad detail to your story, this ha a lot of potential!
xContinuous xContinuous Jan 07, 2011
@agentpenguin 
                              I didn't come from a cave ;D
                              @MeiLiMemo 
                              tyyy :D
agentpenguin agentpenguin Jan 07, 2011
Please go back to your cave. I feel like I have serious competition and im not liking the feeling one bit. =.=