Alpha May I?

Alpha May I?

214K Reads 2.9K Votes 27 Part Story
Chyna Lovee By ChynaGaaawd Completed

Riley considered herself fat. From the comments her "Family" and "pack" made. She almost hated herself. On Riley's birthday her mate Lucas rejects her. Riley storms away full of hate and rage. She runs into her best and only friend Kyle. Then she meets the little Tommy. Adorable and already attached. When Lucas's pack has to stay with hers is it a recipe of disaster? or fate?

SkylerSabine SkylerSabine Nov 10, 2013
I love your book keep writing thank you. She will be a great alpher female, see how easily she settled the misunderstanding with Blake and  also see how easily she took Tommy under her wings ( charge )
Wyyldfairy Wyyldfairy Oct 13, 2013
K this is just weird and v confusing...like he just mated her in front of everyone??
SkylerSabine SkylerSabine Sep 27, 2013
love it thank you, that is what you have to do with a child that is hurting and is suffering the loss of a parent or parents they will always need a hug always 
                              
                              Please give a child a hug and talk to them thank you
neetrith neetrith May 15, 2013
Nice work but maybe slowing down the pacing a bit would help the readers feel the story more.
BxBLove BxBLove Nov 12, 2012
Sucha great story! Tommy is too cute can't wait for you to upload even more!!!
I_Made_You_Read_This I_Made_You_Read_This Jul 13, 2012
i think it's happened to quickly, you need to explain things more