Ocean Born

Ocean Born

6.4K Reads 424 Votes 5 Part Story
Rachel E. Paige By REPaige Updated Sep 30, 2016

"Many have withered away by desiring that which they cannot have; do not let that become your fate," was the sea witch's warning.
    
    Young, impulsive, and desperate to breathe the air above the ocean, Princess Dylana will do almost anything to earn herself a pair of legs. Even if that means she must risk revealing the existence of her kind to mortal men. Given a magical mirror as means of a portal between worlds, Dylana travels to the mortal realm where she soon finds herself enraptured by life in the open air. But all magic comes with a cost, and Dylana knows this. Is she really willing to put her people's lives in jeopardy in order to follow her heart?
    
    
Retelling of 'The Little Mermaid'; following the original fairy tale by Hans Christian Andersen.

Winner of the 2016 FCRAs in the 'People of the Sea' category.

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SilvanaMae SilvanaMae Mar 11, 2017
Dylana's such an optimist, I'm really interested in where this is going!
SilvanaMae SilvanaMae Mar 11, 2017
Great beginning, you do a good job giving us readers an introduction to your characters 😄
Good job .... Like the beginning , excited to read further ....
Ally2028 Ally2028 Sep 19, 2017
I love how you started this story!!!! great intro!!!! really draws in the reader!!!!!!
_brebabe_ _brebabe_ Dec 23, 2016
WHY DOES THIS NOT HAVE MORE READS. HOLY MOLY. I am in love with this already! 😍😘