The lonely reaper

The lonely reaper

10.6K Reads 125 Votes 14 Part Story
rchelbritman By rchelbritman Updated Dec 13, 2011

Mica is the boy who only wanted a friend. Alana is the girl that only wanted to find her true love but was cut off short. Delilah was the one who wanted to be recognized for who she was. And I, well I'm just screwed beneath all these souls. I'm known as the reaper

shazzypops shazzypops Nov 29, 2011
Okay I must admit now I am quite confused after reading this chapter...The grammar does not improving, you'll find a great editor at @editorsUNITE. Hope that helps :) I do like the bit at the end on the cloud :)
rchelbritman rchelbritman Feb 06, 2011
@sydenay thanks for all the support :) im glad you like it and i will absolutely read your stuff and give feedback :D
Cass17 Cass17 Feb 06, 2011
I like the way you've started this story.
                              There are a few grammar and punctuation errors you should look out for, but nothing major
                              Keep writing!
rchelbritman rchelbritman Feb 01, 2011
@xxultravioletxx thanks for the criticism, ill be sure to fix it :) 
zanes_15 zanes_15 Jan 23, 2011
this is really nice and refreshing!! man...this is what i really wanted to read... maybe you could just increase the pace of the story but technically its awesome!!
daydreamer1977 daydreamer1977 Jan 18, 2011
I read this after you asked if I would.  I found there were a few minor spelling issues, nothing major.  
                              
                              You have great descriptions, and I can tell you have worked hard on this.
                              
                              Sarah.