Heir's Fatal Attraction

Heir's Fatal Attraction

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Crystal Santacruz By Santacruz23 Completed

I am alone. I have always been alone. People looked at me as a freak, weirdo, psycho and I never had friends. People are afraid of me and my father, they always had. I hear a dark voice in my mind, telling me to do bad stuff to others.

Then, I met her, Giselle. I wanted her and the voice wanted her too. She could be the cure to my loneliness and sadness. I needed her and love her. She may not see it in her heart, but she will love me in time. I will do anything and everything to have her by side...forever. 

Even if...I have to kill...

                                                                                                                             -Evan Kayson

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hoorray1 hoorray1 Nov 17
The last two sentences of the paragraph are a little confusing. You should fix them