The Ghost

The Ghost

3K Reads 133 Votes 30 Part Story
Brian Basham By BrianBasham Completed

Season 1: The Cursed Armor
The Ghost is a master thief who has stolen an artifact that gives her superhuman abilities, but it also gives her the urge to kill. She is addicted to the power the armor gives, but the side effects make her question if it's worth it. She alienates her friends while following the addiction all the way to her own personal hell. Will she be able to escape it?

Edited novella to be published 10/24/17 on Amazon

Noirotica Noirotica Apr 25, 2014
Interesting power source, the armor, and the fact that it is punishing as well as helpful.
Noirotica Noirotica Apr 25, 2014
Excellent. I can see why it's #1. I'm not a big fan of first person, present tense, but your brisk action style fits it well and it reads very smoothly. I would prefer smaller paragraphs, but that's just a personal preference. Congrats on being #1 in two genres!
PawPress PawPress Jan 19, 2014
Boots really do sound like tiny bombs, don't they. This is an intense and action-oriented start to your story, as it should be =)