The Test

The Test

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Patricia S. By Patpookie Updated Jan 28

Going through my pictures, I went to the one that I had just taken, and the phone slowly slipped out of my grasp.
    What had escaped my notice before is that the couch I had taken the picture on was against a window, which showed the backyard of the house. But in this picture, it wasn't an empty backyard. No, behind my smiling face was another one, outside the window. It was his face. Covered with a black ski mask, watching me.

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    All 19-year-old Layna wanted to do was forget about the guy that broke her heart, and move on with her new boyfriend Brian.
    But instead, she unwittingly attracted the attention of a stalker. Someone who had been watching her every move for a month, plotting and planning for the perfect moment when he could take her.
    What Layna never would have expected was that when he finally kidnaps her, she would have to undergo "The Test". The Test that the girls before her had gone through. The one they failed, and payed heavily for.
    Will she pass The Test or will she die like the others?

- - Jun 03, 2016
I knew something was fishy. Hm, knew some things were different, carry on!:3 love this story either way
XxInspiredByAnimexX XxInspiredByAnimexX Mar 29, 2016
I only discovered these exist like 3 months ago 😳 WHERE HAVE I BEEN?!?!?!
BeautyAintPain BeautyAintPain Sep 17, 2016
Oooo, thats shady...and wrong, considering ur stalker didnt forget u😱😱😱
scooterpooh144 scooterpooh144 Jun 15, 2016
As I turned around to leave, I see the baby monitor sitting on the changing table. You put say instead of see.
Bepbadatusernamesbop Bepbadatusernamesbop Apr 04, 2016
Gonna admit I just turned on my bedroom light and my lamp and my bathroom light and my porch light and my hall light
_carpe_diem _carpe_diem Nov 19, 2015
let me finish it please! I'm French so I need a little bit more time to read. I like it so much from the beginning xX