The Test

The Test

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Patricia S. By Patpookie Completed

Going through my pictures, I went to the one that I had just taken, and the phone slowly slipped out of my grasp.
    What had escaped my notice before is that the couch I had taken the picture on was against a window, which showed the backyard of the house. But in this picture, it wasn't an empty backyard. No, behind my smiling face was another one, outside the window. It was his face. Covered with a black ski mask, watching me.

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    All 19-year-old Layna wanted to do was forget about the guy that broke her heart, and move on with her new boyfriend Brian.
    But instead, she unwittingly attracted the attention of a stalker. Someone who had been watching her every move for a month, plotting and planning for the perfect moment when he could take her.
    What Layna never would have expected was that when he finally kidnaps her, she would have to undergo "The Test". The Test that the girls before her had gone through. The one they failed, and payed heavily for.
    Will she pass The Test or will she die like the others?

  • brian
  • derek
  • greene
  • kidnapper
  • layna
  • police
ammaa123 ammaa123 Aug 16
I dont trust the police, thats why you do your own investigation first then you turn in what you got
I have already read the test but I had read the Spanish version, I think is so interesting and that you have talent, if I were you I would send it to an editorial!!
                              Congrats!!!
ammaa123 ammaa123 Aug 16
Did anyone ask you to correct anything for her? Like this shii is annoying asf, you dont see people complaining do you? So why do you feel the need to do that, you may feel like your being helpful and nice but actually thAt is rude and disrespectful to the author
Kxys16 Kxys16 Jun 28
I've never been scared like this whilst reading a book 😄😄
that were there is really redundant and slows down the tension. The rest is excellent
Oh my God I'm already freaking the hell out already 😵😱