The Test

The Test

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Patpookie By Patpookie Completed

Going through my pictures, I went to the one that I had just taken, and the phone slowly slipped out of my grasp.
    What had escaped my notice before is that the couch I had taken the picture on was against a window, which showed the backyard of the house. But in this picture, it wasn't an empty backyard. No, behind my smiling face was another one, outside the window. It was his face. Covered with a black ski mask, watching me.

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    All 19-year-old Layna wanted to do was forget about the guy that broke her heart, and move on with her new boyfriend Brian.
    But instead, she unwittingly attracted the attention of a stalker. Someone who had been watching her every move for a month, plotting and planning for the perfect moment when he could take her.
    What Layna never would have expected was that when he finally kidnaps her, she would have to undergo "The Test". The Test that the girls before her had gone through. The one they failed, and payed heavily for.
    Will she pass The Test or will she die like the others?

  • detective
  • fbiagent
  • kidnapper
  • mystery
  • police
  • thriller
cheesebust cheesebust May 19
It's there duty to comfort people and help them.How can they be so careless?
tlexxus tlexxus Apr 29
Go fk yrself have u got nothing better to do than to correct others?ik I'm late but whatevs
Call an ambulance...people are getting heart attacks & dying!!!!!
PandaInPjs PandaInPjs Mar 04
I THINK THE DETECTIVE IS THE STALKER, THATS WHY HE ISNT HELPING!!!!
She had a dream where she woke up from a nightmare then died. I hate that.
GracieCCS GracieCCS Mar 25
He always "forgets" she babysits on Friday nights so he can find out where she is