Vampire sans x beautieful reader

Vampire sans x beautieful reader

3.8K Reads 34 Votes 11 Part Story
sitare By sansxreader0w0 Updated Oct 19, 2016

hey guys i love twilight and undertale sans x reader soo i mixed it up a lil too campire sans x reader 


in this story u get new in high school ur very beautiful and u love to draw sing and dance u love drama to 'drama baby'
sans the vampire has an eye on u  you love him because hes hot like HOT i hope u enjoy this !;3

Fransy10 Fransy10 Aug 06
This don't look like Chara it looks like Rue from Princess Tutu
BlueSinnamonRoll BlueSinnamonRoll Oct 11, 2016
Grammar and spelling errors everywhere, also don't use texting abbreviations while writing, it makes it sound like you 1)don't care 2)don't know how it's spelled and 3) a type of person who is ALWAYS on their phone texting
BlueSinnamonRoll BlueSinnamonRoll Oct 11, 2016
I recommend actually spelling out words so you don't sound like this is all a super long text and it doesn't sound as if you are lazy and can't spell it out
hina_chan___ hina_chan___ Oct 20, 2016
Um your idea is good and all but you shouldn't use slang in a book. Plus at some parts it made no sense. All in all it has a good concept. I'll come back and read this once it has better language and makes some more sense ok (´∀`)?
sansxreader0w0 sansxreader0w0 Oct 20, 2016
ok i try best but know one thing iam not from england iam from germany and its not that easy you know
UndertaleGirl1998 UndertaleGirl1998 Nov 25, 2016
MWEHEHEHEHEHE it's okay I love being teased!!😄😄😄😄😄