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If She Only Had Wings - Watty Awards

If She Only Had Wings - Watty Awards

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Michelle By princessB1992 Updated Dec 30, 2011

Keiko lived in a land where evil was customary, and hate was traditional. Pain, and spirits were common. Keiko knew that peace was somewhere in this world, but she had no idea how to achieve it. Join Keiko as she meets God and find what real peace and freedom truly is like...

princessB1992 princessB1992 Dec 30, 2011
@XxXRedRose69XxX Thanks :).   
                              @Soumii  thanks. And I am working on a few ideas, but I won't start until after finals at college so probably not until the end of January. But I am planning on starting a new book
Soumii Soumii Dec 30, 2011
That was great! You could really feel her emotions, and the impatience she had to learn more. Truly amazing. Not much that needs editing, just a few spelling errors, that's all. Do you have any other stories planned for the near future?
XxXRedRose69XxX XxXRedRose69XxX Dec 30, 2011
Michelle! Long time...I'm happy you wrote something. This is very good, you don't need to edit it except for little spelling mistakes like on page 1, the word "Callused" but other than that I really like it! Good job. <3
princessB1992 princessB1992 Dec 30, 2011
@OnCloudInfinity Thanks :) I haven't thought about the spirits much, mostly because I"m not sure what island or where this takes place. or much about idols and such, but I will look into it
princessB1992 princessB1992 Dec 30, 2011
Please help edit this, for its for a school project. Thanks!