After Sundown (on hold - possibly soon to be deleted)

After Sundown (on hold - possibly soon to be deleted)

741 Reads 24 Votes 6 Part Story
XOBIF :) By Minisovs Updated Jan 25, 2011

IMPORTANT: This story will be taken of Wattpad. I may if I have time use the plot and rewrite it, but I just looked at the first page and was really annoyed with my self that I posted this story like that. If it is going to be rewritten it will be after I have finished at least 5 chapters for Love of an Assassin. Thank you to all of you who read this story :)

Don't wander the streets alone. Don't look behind you when you hear footsteps. Don't get scared when you look behind. Don't go out after sundown...

Minisovs Minisovs Jan 14, 2011
@mt_foster haha, thank you for pointing that out, I hadn't notices, 2 sec and it is sunday both times ;) 
mt_foster mt_foster Jan 14, 2011
Besides the few grammar errors, this is really good. Although, when she first woke up she said it was Saturday. Then, when her friend called they talked about it being Sunday. 
Minisovs Minisovs Jan 13, 2011
@tianajade I'm really glad you liked it :)! Hmm.. I'm just going to check out the mistakes :) 
                              Thank you so much for reading! ;D
tianajade tianajade Jan 13, 2011
There were a few grammar errors on the first page, and some on the second page, but not many on the  third page. The third page was the actual page that got me excited. I think it's good so far, and I'm going to read on. *Voted*.
Minisovs Minisovs Jan 08, 2011
@tbargon Thank you! 
                              Sure I will read your story :) 
                              And again thank you for reading mine :).
Teegarden Teegarden Jan 08, 2011
You had me, sitting here in the palm of your hand. Great story. I really couldn't see where it was heading. Loved the characters.
                              
                              Keep writing!
                              
                              I would love it if you would read my story 'Climate Change'.  Cheers!