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Electric Gathering- *EDITING*

Electric Gathering- *EDITING*

4K Reads 30 Votes 23 Part Story
Ingrid By psycho12 Updated Mar 29, 2013

Strobe lights and gas machines make the prettiest of scenes. But when drama and music collide there isn't anyone that can hide. Juliet is your average girl with and average life until the city's hottest underground DJ jumps off the stage to help her and that's when their musical lives collides. night life isn't really cut out for the weak and neither is the musical world. But if your brave enough to fight it out it might turn out to be worth it in the end.

psycho12 psycho12 Apr 25, 2011
@xxmajaine yeah thanks, for the description thing i'll be sure to change it. i'm not so good with grammer and in fact i'm looking for an editor. and well the begining that's how i thought about it. well it happemned and then i thought about the day i met this guy lol.
psycho12 psycho12 Mar 29, 2011
@BlackSwan15 @MissCawiee @CountryStrong @trishthewriter @Cazza94 @PhoebeElizabeth  thanks for reading i tryed fixing the errors. tell me what you think.
suGar_Twinkles95 suGar_Twinkles95 Feb 24, 2011
A few spelling errors, but then again people make mistake:) Love it though
dreamy_ dreamy_ Feb 24, 2011
Well, everytime someone speaks start a capital, your story is dry, needs some juicyness to it, also your punctuation need's tons of improvement. It's a bit confusing.
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CountryStrong CountryStrong Feb 24, 2011
Good first chapter, however when the characters start talking first letter needs to be a capital. Other than that I enjoyed reading :)
MISSMiSsA MISSMiSsA Feb 16, 2011
Hmm different but I do like the first chapter, moving on to read more :) voted and once I get through the rest I may just fan if it keeps getting better, which I think it will!! :)