Love of an Assassin

Love of an Assassin

1.7K Reads 47 Votes 5 Part Story
XOBIF :) By Minisovs Updated Mar 15, 2011

Sylvia "Vivi" Hayden is one of the best assassins in the old London (18th). Strange things happen that leads to events where Vivi must fight not to break one or all of the three rules of an assassin, 1. Kill or be killed, 2. Never go into rage, 3. Never fall in love. 
But nothing is easy when the streets of London are filled with traitors, plots and ever lasting secrets.

xxWrittenDreamsxx xxWrittenDreamsxx Sep 25, 2012
Definitely a good start!  Hooked me and it's just the prologue......and i do the same thing with my stories :P (pull them out of thin air ^.^ lol)  its great ;)
ChristianRose ChristianRose Apr 05, 2011
First story, other than mine, that I have added to my library... Ive only barely started reading, but because I like where its going, I made that move.
                              Voted and fanned as well.
Minisovs Minisovs Mar 15, 2011
@Kira-Kira Thanks! 
                              I have a tendency to change fast and make things messy o.o But thank you for your honest comment, I'll see if I can do anything about it :)  Though it's a hard habit to break s:
Kira-Kira Kira-Kira Mar 15, 2011
Cool story bro:) The plot in it is very thrilling, although its hard to catch up on. You should probably focus on only ONE subject per paragraph, then start a new paragraph for each subject, making it clearer, cleaner, and even better than before:) But thats just my opinion, i love it either way.
Minisovs Minisovs Feb 07, 2011
@emmikat  Haha, weird? How? :)
                              - Thank you for reading ^^ (I know how it is with not much time, so I understand what you mean)
emmikat emmikat Feb 07, 2011
Thats a little weird. But, i am reading like i promised!!
                              ~~emmikat
                              P.S. sorry it took me so long. I was short on time.