Betrothed To Death

Betrothed To Death

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Bunny-Mommy By Bunny-Mommy Completed

Pitiful child, Not yet ready to die. I shall give you the gift of Time. But my gift has a price to be paid, On your twenty-first year, I'll whisk you away. Away to my world to be my bride.

You know when you said this was rough I was expecting something chopy but my god if this is rough I can't wait to see what your perfected work is like!
The you before illness should be your. I hope you don't mind me correcting
Thanatos is the greek god of death, while hades is the god of the dead and underworld.
I love that you have long chapters you don't find those any more in Wattpad books
I love how she's like I don't have a dress and isn't freaking out that she's marrying a total stranger that she's known for a week.
I think it should be a instead of the when referring to the black vest. Wearing a black vest and pants