Hush and Listen

Hush and Listen

5.8K Reads 127 Votes 14 Part Story
Seshi Faye By xXseshiXx Updated Jul 23, 2012

Judas is a quiet, reserved teenager. Who wouldn't be after their mother abandoned him and his alcoholic father abuses him. When Judas meets Aila his whole world shifts to love. But can a person really shift from an abusive, solitude world to that of a loving world? Do wounds really heal? The real question is, is Judas himself even ready for love?

silly_missy silly_missy Feb 04, 2012
Im glad his dads leaving...
                              Oooh is itzthel the same guy from your GOTH book (:
heyhannah92 heyhannah92 Mar 21, 2011
This story has a lot of potential!!  The only thing I have to say is that maybe you might want to think about breaking up paragraphs to make it easier to read.  Other than that, this is awesome!  Great job!
CosmosInChaos CosmosInChaos Mar 21, 2011
I love the name you used (judas) it isnt to cliche and i know only a few people that have that name, he is a fighter and i appreciate that.  Story is a downer but this is something that can't go by missed. You have a lot of potential. Keep it up *library*
xXseshiXx xXseshiXx Mar 20, 2011
Thanks for the feedback :) ill fix it as soon as I get my computer working again :)
50STATEKIDZ 50STATEKIDZ Jan 05, 2011
This is really good;] Judas seems likee a very nice boy. I can't believe his father abuses him. Hopee someone puts a stop to that! lols. Upload !!