Pomegranates

Pomegranates

20.1K Reads 1.2K Votes 15 Part Story
W. S. AFiYS By WsAfiys Completed

"Want to hear a story dearies?" Atropos asked, as she cut a thread.

"Let us bring you one," crooned Lachesis as she spun a new destiny.

"That of pomegranates and changing seasons," finished Clotho as she began a life.

Story One of Greek Gods Collection.

Nihaalzia122 Nihaalzia122 Dec 25, 2016
Hi im so sorry could somone read my story so sorry to the person who made this story i just need some reads
- - Sep 19, 2016
This is really interesting to read!! What inspired you to create something like this? It's amazing :)
WsAfiys WsAfiys Sep 19, 2016
@abiran1995 Yep. The 'thread of life' to be exact. They decide when one is born, their lifespan and when they died.
alittlebitbonkers alittlebitbonkers Oct 20, 2016
I like it.  Of course, I'm biased because I grew up Greek mythology, but that's beside the point.  The point being that this is a great start and I look forward to reading more.
neuravinci neuravinci Sep 28, 2016
I think the writing is a bit clunky.
                              
                              The first paragraph has too much going on, too many descriptions, and in general, the sentences are too long. Truncate to make it flow better.
zainablove12 zainablove12 Oct 07, 2016
It is good but it need a little help , a ton. The fist paragraph uas too much going on