Naruto leaves the village at the age of 4 and returns when he is 11 to join the academy will anyone rembember the hated "Demon" of the village?
This is very difficult to read cause you can't tell who's talking
Why are they all caps, why is there no space after a comma, and no space after the period
AHHHH TOO MUCH CAPITALIZED *Gurgle*......Ded
Im lost The capitalization is making me confused like u banged your head as hard as a bedrock
It all having caps is slightly bugging me, but it's better than some other fics that I've read.
The grammar was nauseating in those!
My eyes and brains is scrambled
-Almost EveryThing Is Capitalized Like This.
-There Are Hardly Speech Marks Its Like Its Narrating
Wait so you sat and watched a 5yr old getting beaten to the brink of death... A.S.S.H.O.L.E.S