Naruto:Rise Of The Forgotten Genius

Naruto:Rise Of The Forgotten Genius

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DinoWaffles2 By DinoWaffles2 Updated Dec 26, 2016

Naruto leaves the village at the age  of 4 and returns when he is 11 to join the academy will anyone rembember the hated "Demon" of the village?

117Beta 117Beta Dec 08, 2016
This is very difficult to read cause you can't tell who's talking
jadenbuggy jadenbuggy Dec 17, 2016
Why are they all caps, why is there no space after a comma, and no space after the period
NeyaWinnA NeyaWinnA Jan 07
AHHHH TOO MUCH CAPITALIZED *Gurgle*......Ded 
                              
                              
                              
                              Im lost The capitalization is making me confused like u banged your head as hard as a bedrock
AkumaNoKitsuneFoxz AkumaNoKitsuneFoxz Dec 08, 2016
It all having caps is slightly bugging me, but it's better than some other fics that I've read.
                              *shudders*
                              The grammar was nauseating in those!
NeyaWinnA NeyaWinnA Jan 07
My eyes and brains is scrambled
                              
                              -Almost EveryThing Is Capitalized Like This.
                              -There Are Hardly Speech Marks Its Like Its Narrating
ColdScarletNight ColdScarletNight Dec 20, 2016
Wait so you sat and watched a 5yr old getting beaten to the brink of death... A.S.S.H.O.L.E.S