Naruto:Rise Of The Forgotten Genius

Naruto:Rise Of The Forgotten Genius

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DinoWaffles2 By DinoWaffles2 Updated Dec 26, 2016

Naruto leaves the village at the age  of 4 and returns when he is 11 to join the academy will anyone rembember the hated "Demon" of the village?

_Dorito _Dorito Jul 14
The thing that annoys me the most is that it says Naruto's POV but its third person...
AlonaDilts AlonaDilts Jul 08
Everyone else is confused about the speech then there's me I thought he was four?
Can you... fix up the diret communications in the story I kinda got confused.. 
                              And some Speech marks (") because that can help a bit.
Doesn't that make him a rouge ninja tho...? Or does it not since he doesn't have a headband, dunno.
spookishima spookishima Feb 08
I wonder how long it took you to capitalize the first letter of every word.
BlueHDW27 BlueHDW27 Jan 07
AHHHH TOO MUCH CAPITALIZED *Gurgle*......Ded 
                              
                              
                              
                              Im lost The capitalization is making me confused like u banged your head as hard as a bedrock