Naruto Leaves The Village At The Age Of 4 And Returns When He Is 11 To Join The Academy Will Anyone Rembember The Hated "Demon" Of The Village?
This is very difficult to read cause you can't tell who's talking
Naruto doesn't know kurama's name at the age of five, nor even talked to him. I don't where this story is going but I'm having a hard time keeping up because I kept up with the series.
It all having caps is slightly bugging me, but it's better than some other fics that I've read.
The grammar was nauseating in those!
Seriously recommend to put quotation marks on every"said sentence".. It'll be a lot easier to understand and read
This book is already giving me a head ache because there are no speech marks.
Well i added my on twist so naruto knows that kurama is the kyuubi's real name,and he has already met kurama.