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Naruto:Rise Of The Forgotten Genius

Naruto:Rise Of The Forgotten Genius

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DinoWaffles2 By DinoWaffles2 Updated Dec 26, 2016

Naruto leaves the village at the age  of 4 and returns when he is 11 to join the academy will anyone rembember the hated "Demon" of the village?

Can you... fix up the diret communications in the story I kinda got confused.. 
                              And some Speech marks (") because that can help a bit.
jadenbuggy jadenbuggy Dec 17, 2016
Why are they all caps, why is there no space after a comma, and no space after the period
spookishima spookishima Feb 08
I wonder how long it took you to capitalize the first letter of every word.
NeyaWinnA NeyaWinnA Jan 07
                              Im lost The capitalization is making me confused like u banged your head as hard as a bedrock
NeyaWinnA NeyaWinnA Jan 07
My eyes and brains is scrambled
                              -Almost EveryThing Is Capitalized Like This.
                              -There Are Hardly Speech Marks Its Like Its Narrating
ColdScarletNight ColdScarletNight Dec 20, 2016
Wait so you sat and watched a 5yr old getting beaten to the brink of death... A.S.S.H.O.L.E.S