Cliché, Touché and Douche

Cliché, Touché and Douche

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{Highest rank #12 in chicklit}
I was walking on a path all alone at midnight. I was just wondering around, until I saw a guy in a hoodie. He was beating the pulp out of another guy and one more man was on the ground, he is not moving. I gasp. 'Is he dead ?' Or he can be unconscious, yeah 'el' he is just unconscious not dead. Duh! 

Who would kill a guy? As I was proceeding with my thoughts, that hoodie guy turn his face towards me. My heart had an Minni heart attack. I turn my heels to the opposite direction and started to run. 'Run Ella, run for your life' was what my mind was screaming to me. I took turns without thinking, that guy was now following me and guess what? I took a wrong turn and which ended up to be a dead end ' you are so dead' I thought.

 So, Istarted to think what I said last time to people I love 'good night mom, love you' to my mom, 'stop annoying me, I'm going to bed' to dad which also mean I love you 'see you later Lu, love you' to Luana. Okay my good byes says I love them all. Now I can die in peace. Granddad I'll meet you soon in the heaven, if you are there. I was still in my deep thoughts until I was his silhouette. As, he get closer my heart begin to race faster. I closed my eyes, untill I heard him say "Ella?" 

O to the M to the G, this person actually know me. I opened my one eye and saw him due to the small light hanging in that ally "Errrrr'ick" I said and mentally face palm myself even at this state I'm calling him Errr'ick. "I'm sorry your highness,what can I do for you?" I squeak while trembling.

The next second I heard his laughter.He was rolling on the floor, actually rofling.
I was glaring at him but I realise that l'm not in a position to glare.So,I made puppy dog face for him to spare my little life.He stopped but after seeing my face, he started to laugh again.

He tried to say between his guffaw "you..... your face .....was epiccc" he started to gasp for air and had tears in his eyes.

Tbh I loved the title of your book. Looking forward to read.
Love the picture and this paragraph here! Curious to see how this goes.
Young-Love Young-Love Oct 16
Tbh I actually like your title its different which makes you wanna definitely check it out have the same name as my 9 yr old daughter💟💜
MLYGhost MLYGhost Oct 27
Good for you! 👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼🙌🏼🙌🏼🙌🏼