The new king is my mate! (Not edited!!){Wattys2017} (Re-writing)

The new king is my mate! (Not edited!!){Wattys2017} (Re-writing)

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T.E.S By Tabbiecat1213 Completed

"MINE" a voice shouted making me melt in happiness...
....................
Blooms life was never the picture of happiness. She always dreamed of finding a mate, someone to love and cherish her.
All her dreams are crushed when she meets Aiden the evil alpha also known as her mate. What happens when she manages to escape but lands herself in the royal packs territory. Well a new mate... the king

  • alpha
  • kidnapped
  • kingmate
  • mate
  • mates
  • pack
  • prince
  • princess
  • queen
  • rejected
  • romance
  • romance-
  • romance-werewolf
  • royal
  • soulmate
  • wattys
  • wattys2017
  • werewolf
  • wolf
Ja2Anjelica Ja2Anjelica Sep 28, 2017
 #Tbc, I loved this exciting prologue... It was intriguing af and made me wanna jump right into it. (I say that cos werewolf is not my genre) But your book's prologue is very promising.
baileyanntuck baileyanntuck Sep 04, 2017
That's exactly what he deserves I mean I can't believe he did all of those horrible things to her and her being his mate. I want to smash his head into a freaking wall. #TBC
DarkFallenAngel12 DarkFallenAngel12 Mar 22, 2017
So I don't like Aiden at all...
                              I kind of want to beat his skull in with a metal baseball bat...
                              So yeah I really do not like Aiden Summers at all if I was in this book he would have been the second I seen him but that's just how I am so yup I am now done with this rant thing lol XD...
ovdolan ovdolan Aug 27, 2017
 #tbc
                              
                              I love the plot of this book but honestly I think your chapters are a bit short. I recommend adding more visual scenes what the attackers are doing to her and her friends. There are some grammatical errors but none that are huge, good job! Overall, I loved this chapter.
baileyanntuck baileyanntuck Sep 04, 2017
The first sentence "What the hell?" Should have a question mark. #TBC
baileyanntuck baileyanntuck Sep 04, 2017
 #TBC This was detailed and good I only saw one grammar error in the first paragraph but I'm not good at grammar so I could be wrong.😂 I like that you announced that it was in the past so that no one got confused at the first of the story. I like the way you use words though also.