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Excluded [On Hold]

Excluded [On Hold]

743 Reads 15 Votes 12 Part Story
wildhamster By wildhamster Updated Jun 20, 2011

Jayden lost his best friend, but he can't even remember it. His friend  Addison suffers, but he doesn't realize it.  When he hangs out with his friends, he isn't aware of the secret they're keeping from him.  He can't even remember the man he hated most.  When the secrets are revealed, he is pulled back into the mess he had unwillingly escaped.  Addison and the rest of his friends are all trapped in the mess along with him as they fight the ones who oppose them.  What will happen?  Who will win the battle?

wildhamster wildhamster Jan 08, 2011
@xXhopelessromanticXx and @angiesage4 yeah, I'm sorry that it's confusing.  A lot is explained in chapter four.  Thanks :)
xXhopelessromanticXx xXhopelessromanticXx Jan 08, 2011
Hmm, a bit confusing a some grammatical errors but overall this sounds like a good story :) keep writing
angiesage4 angiesage4 Jan 06, 2011
wow this is great. bit confusing giving too much information about things unexplained but overall awesome keep typing