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MY MATE IS THE APHLA!?!

MY MATE IS THE APHLA!?!

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Ty😜😜😘😍❤️ By Ty-Boyer Updated Jun 11

Jade is 18 and disliked by her mate and older brother max bc of her parents died whom they blame her for. Will they ever for give her or will they not read to find out
  
  (Not edited)
  (NOT GOOD GRAMMER)
  (Some missed spelling)

The spelling in this....dosent even make sense im confused...
I can't help but just think of Namjoon saying 'Peaches and Cream'
hera_fox hera_fox Oct 22, 2016
Ummmmmm how old are you exactly? Your grammar isn't good, you don't use commas, your spelling isn't good either, and you don't use quotation marks. No offense.
ArgentAce ArgentAce Oct 24, 2016
Hiiiiiiiiii. So I was wondering if you wanted some editing for your book. To fix the grammar and such because new eyes see all! If ya want any editing please give me a text on my account I would be happy to help. And maybe if you want I could help it flow more.