MY MATE IS THE APHLA!?!

MY MATE IS THE APHLA!?!

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Ty???????????? By Ty-Boyer Updated Nov 27

Jade is 17 and hated by her whole pack even her older brother because her parents died when she was four and they said she should have died not them 
  
  Ty says
  Thts it just read da story it u want more bye 
  
  By the way yea she will run away but she wont find another matef same old mate in not tht dumb it different so yea read if u want to find out
  
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  (NOT GOOD GRAMMER PPL IM YOUNG OKAY SO DNT BE MAD AT ME IF U DNT UNDERSTAND THEN DNT READ)

Ummmmmm how old are you exactly? Your grammar isn't good, you don't use commas, your spelling isn't good either, and you don't use quotation marks. No offense.
Hiiiiiiiiii. So I was wondering if you wanted some editing for your book. To fix the grammar and such because new eyes see all! If ya want any editing please give me a text on my account I would be happy to help. And maybe if you want I could help it flow more.