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The Immortals~

The Immortals~

10.9K Reads 152 Votes 33 Part Story
suGar_Twinkles95 By suGar_Twinkles95 Completed

Penelope has suffered a great loss, with her Family. Especially her own blood and soul...Esmeralda. When she met Erik a while back, she knew there was something very strange about him, but couldn't figure out how? As Penelope travels to dangerous paths trying to find Why her Parents death had came so drastically. She needs help with only one person she despises the first time she met him. Damon. Damon the handsome good features. His mysterious electrifying blue eyes, that would make any girl fantasies to be in his arm.  While on her journey Erik is on his own. But he has disappear and Penelope has to choose whether to find her Old friend. Or return her parents back from the day she watched them die.

suGar_Twinkles95 suGar_Twinkles95 Feb 10, 2011
@Litephoenix283 :thanks:) 
                              @Asha1926 :Thanks  I really appreciate it:) 
suGar_Twinkles95 suGar_Twinkles95 Feb 05, 2011
@shelbylw03 : lol yeah, that's what I wanted Damen and Erik to be, H-O-T :) Thanks for reading:)
shelbylw03 shelbylw03 Feb 01, 2011
Really awesome story. And can I just say the male characters you picked for this story are hot. :-)
suGar_Twinkles95 suGar_Twinkles95 Jan 29, 2011
@Hartress : Oh thanks:P lol am not very good with grammar but I'll try my best:) Thanks that you liked my story
Hartress Hartress Jan 29, 2011
I liked this story very much. The plot was good but there are a few spelling errors and some grammar mistakes.  I think it could use a little bit more description as to what is going on in their surroundings, but that's just my opinion. Hope to see more! 
suGar_Twinkles95 suGar_Twinkles95 Jan 28, 2011
@bloodcycle :she didn't see him naked, he was wearing a towel around his waist, she was just exaggerating:)