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Kings Obsession (Under Editing)

Kings Obsession (Under Editing)

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DarkDragonRider By DarkDragonRider Completed

James is a heartless king of a big kingdom, he murdered his parents at the age of 12 so he could take over the throne. he is cruel, cold-hearted and did not care for his people. until one day when he leads an attack on a village that failed to pay there bills he comes across a girl and instantly becomes love obsessed with her.

Alice is a farm girl who lives with her parents in a small village. she lives a happy life until the king attacks her village and she is captured and taken to the kings castle and is forced to become the kings personal servant.

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TheRealAbbiStar TheRealAbbiStar 6 hours ago
How can she be thinking about breathtaking views when her mum was just killed in front of her? 😂
TheRohanY TheRohanY May 18
There should be a comma after "My king". Sorry for the several nitpicky comments, but I noticed that you are editing so I wanted to leave some feedback too!
TheRohanY TheRohanY May 18
The r should be capitalized, as it is the beginning of a sentence
I swear to God if she falls in love with this sadistic ruthless bastard
TheRohanY TheRohanY May 18
Also should be "loud noise" not "load". Additionally, that whole sentence is a bit of a run-on, might wanna fix that.