A Boarding School for Boys... I'm a Girl (editing)

A Boarding School for Boys... I'm a Girl (editing)

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Jordan is a girl that dremed about to leave her foster family. When she finally escapes to the VW Boarding School she thinks it's just an ordinary school, but a huge surprise awaits for her.

I was just wondering if you'd like writing advice to capture more readers. I know some people do and I have a few suggestions. I really like the story line though.
Is it just me or when he said his name is jonas, i thought of the jonas brothers
Gaya22g Gaya22g Jan 28
why did the principal accept her ? This is a boarding school for boys not girls they can simply say no? but i really like the idea and it's a special story
DRAWmatic DRAWmatic Jan 07, 2014
Uhg I love love love the idea but the grammar is making this impossible to read :/ please fix it sounds great and I don't want that to ruin it for me!
DRAWmatic DRAWmatic Jan 07, 2014
Uhg i love the idea it sounds amazing but the grammar is making it impossible to read :/ plz fix the grammar