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gstone5999 By gstone5999 Updated Jan 04, 2014

Hannah Jackson has been abused and is mute but what will life bring to her.                                                                                                                                      It's not very good it's my first book I will welcome feedback thanks

Nooby_Noob Nooby_Noob Apr 04
Called it...=\ I get so sad over these things...I hope she finds a better man >.>
renee312 renee312 Mar 05, 2016
I think you should put quotations around what they are saying like these '' not these ""
jocelyncheerislife jocelyncheerislife May 29, 2016
Also u said that she was mute and we didn't even get to that cause mute is when u literally don't talk u write stuff down and u don't talk to anyone even your family and best friends even your MATE
Hey1tsFrey Hey1tsFrey Feb 26, 2016
You might be offended but
                              I really think you should use grammar.
RubyStars11 RubyStars11 Jul 02, 2016
She is a white wolf with a red muzzle. She did not change from white to red (:
jocelyncheerislife jocelyncheerislife May 29, 2016
A lot more discriptive and don't skip to far like a year is a lot of time that we should have known about