Hannah Jackson has been Abused and is mute but what will life bring to her. It's not very good it's my first book I will welcome feedback thanks
I think you should put quotations around what they are saying like these '' not these ""
Am I the only one who feels like this is so rushed? I'm like trying to keep up, but it's so hard.
Also u said that she was mute and we didn't even get to that cause mute is when u literally don't talk u write stuff down and u don't talk to anyone even your family and best friends even your MATE
You might be offended but
I really think you should use grammar.
She is a white wolf with a red muzzle. She did not change from white to red (:
A lot more discriptive and don't skip to far like a year is a lot of time that we should have known about