New Haven

15 Part Story 15.9K Reads 487 Votes
feydoc By feydoc Updated 2 years ago
Earth has been affected by a lethal plague that has wiped out three quarters of the world's population. As the infrastructure disintegrated, so did the stability of the environment. In this hostile new world, a small faction has come together for survival. Autumn Jessup risks everything to leave Wayside when she learns of the group. She embarks on a journey with her children and a few dear friends that will take them all through exciting and heartbreaking discoveries, and will eventually lead them to a safe New Haven.
Like the MC name; sounds just like mine. :D
                                    Intense opening; life is clearly defined as altered. As is the mental state of some... Wonder where this will lead us?
I'm completely loving this! One for the reading list. Great job.
Intriguing - I love it. I'm putting this on my reading list... and voting!
I love this story! I couldnt put it down. Not many stories capture my full attention & draw me into their world, but this one did. I hope there is more to come, but if not, you ended the chapter very well.
This is great so far, and I agree I'm more afraid of her husband than the impending doom of the world.
Nice character construction. Internal conflict was well written as was the external. Granted a little more would be nice but that's just me. There were multiple areas which could be cleaned up, sense the flow gets interrupted in those areas. Other than that this was a good read.