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T a k e n

T a k e n

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Rachel By jennamarie Updated Jan 18, 2011

Seventeen-year-old Ashlyn Meyers had a perfect life. She had the picture perfect boyfriend, popularity, and a perfect family that was loaded with cash. She had everything she could ever want and in one day it was all t a k e n away.

TieDye TieDye Jan 25, 2011
Poor Ashlyn! If all of that happened to me within 24 hours I would probably be on the verge of suicide! It was a bit rushed, but I did like your theory of putting it all into one chapter. It made sense to me, and you didn't go on and on with pointless detail. Nice work. :)
jennamarie jennamarie Jan 20, 2011
@-Rusik- Lol thats what I was trying to do, that was supposed to happen in all in one chapter because in one day her life was supposed to be utterly destroyed :D 
jennamarie jennamarie Jan 19, 2011
@GeeGeeBeanss You go to the waaaaay bottom of the chapter and click the blue letters : Chapter Two 
jennamarie jennamarie Jan 09, 2011
@angeleyeshush @MsBooks95 @pheniox 
                              I LOVE YOU GUYS.. bottom line hehehe ;)
angeleyeshush angeleyeshush Jan 08, 2011
                              This is a good one ! :D
                              I mean, it's amazing how your able to fit 
                              so many idea's into one chapter ! 
pheniox pheniox Jan 07, 2011
 that has to be the beginning of many shitty days to come . . i applaud u Rachel for actually catching my interest