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Coopersville Murders(editing)

Coopersville Murders(editing)

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AnonomiaUnknownia By AnonomiaUnknownia Completed

(Previously  called Seventeen don't change a thing). 
 They say that Coopersville has never had any crime. A town filled  with people too proud and love to gossip. 
Annika Smith has always been faced by ridicule of the a town.  So what happens when the attempted rape and murder of Annika and her freind Vanessa occurs? What happens when the closet thing to crime , twenty one year old Julian Davis some how gets involved?.
When the town thinks nothing of the attack as a drunken fling between Julian and Annika ,more sinister times approach.
 Every family has it's secrets, every house has it's skeletons in their closet. The town Anikka grew up in becomes something unknown and to make matters worse teenage girls  are being  murdered and bodies are turning up. Someone knows more than they should  and although Annika is not seventeen yet is anyone safe?

AnonomiaUnknownia AnonomiaUnknownia Jun 12, 2011
@sesquipedalian Thanks so much for the critique. I will work on it.
AnonomiaUnknownia AnonomiaUnknownia Jun 11, 2011
@faeriechilde Thank you so much for reading, commenting and voting!
AnonomiaUnknownia AnonomiaUnknownia Feb 12, 2011
@Happinessforeva Thank you very much for reading!@trishthewriter Thank you very much for your input , for taking your time to read and for voting. I will take your advice in to mind.
AnonomiaUnknownia AnonomiaUnknownia Feb 10, 2011
@JesusFreak Thank you very much for your support and for reading and voting!
AnonomiaUnknownia AnonomiaUnknownia Jan 29, 2011
@tianajade Thank you for voting, reading and for suggesting some improvements. Thank you .
tianajade tianajade Jan 29, 2011
I think it's a good start. 
                              Maybe a little too fast paced, and a little more emotion and description would be great to add. A few grammar errors here and there. 
                              I think this has potential though! (: It definitely leaves th readers wanting more. Keep writing! *Voted.*