Waiting In Hope

Waiting In Hope

338 Reads 10 Votes 1 Part Story
Elisha Lloyd Craig By ElishaLloyd Completed

A father is sent away to war and his family is left behind. This story goes through every person's point of view as they cope with the absence of a well-loved father and husband. Now that he is gone, his wife and daughter are left, waiting in hope.

NightSpirit NightSpirit Mar 13, 2011
Wow that really is a short story, unless your adding more? but theres a tick next to it? anyway i loved it and it doesnt have many mistakes that i have noticed. well written, please return the favour,x
Embracee Embracee Mar 04, 2011
Hey, wonderful job at trying different views of characters. I love the plot of this short story- how they are always waiting until finally he comes HOME! :D 
                              GOOD JOB!
ElishaLloyd ElishaLloyd Jan 04, 2011
people please read n vote ? my forst story, im soooo not good at writting stories, and my teacher said it was crap, i want you guys' opiniion if i may it please? xD ohtaay,   thankkssss(x