School Of Secrets

School Of Secrets

4.7K Reads 84 Votes 5 Part Story
december_girl By december_girl Updated Jan 10, 2011

When Willa Grey's great aunt dies, she leaves a large amount of money for her to attend the school she went to as a teenager. But when Willa gets there she begins to realise that "The Hardwicke Academy for Refined Ladies and Gentlemen" is a really scary place, just not in the way she thought. The lives of her, and all the students are in the wicked hands of the principal, Elizabeth Hardwicke, a twisted woman who wants the world, and will not give up.

- - Jan 21, 2011
Great story. I loved it. Do you think you could read some of my works? I'd really appreciate it. Please keep up the great work.
IAlone IAlone Jan 08, 2011
Great prologue, can't wait for the rest! I voted
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purplepenny purplepenny Jan 07, 2011
Good opener, it sets the scene real nice. I'm gonna run and read on the other chapters now : )
                              
                              I'll comment when I finish these chapters : ) 
december_girl december_girl Jan 07, 2011
@LoveVA13 no that's fine, I understand where you're coming from... That's what I would have thought if I didn't write the story myself :)
tianajade tianajade Jan 07, 2011
It's alright so far. I think it needs me detail and emotion. I didn't find any grammar errors though, which was great. Keep it up! (:
december_girl december_girl Jan 06, 2011
@coley9498 thanks :) I'm working on a better title cos this one just sounds clichéd