Book of Poems

Book of Poems

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DarkenedNightmares By DarkenedNightmares Updated 5 hours ago

No one reads my shit,
But if you do,
Thanks,
I wrote it for you. 

^Aha! Already rhyming! And you haven't even gotten to the actual poems yet! I am killin' the game. Okay, no, but seriously, I will be updating this as often as possible. I don't claim to be an expert, I just like to talk about death. So bare with me, and please give me criticism so I can get better thanks. Also I update my already written poems, like a lot, I re-read them almost every day, so they will change, hopefully to be better. Not drastically, I'll add things, or remove them, just to make things clearer. Because sometimes I'll be reading a certain section and I'll be all "What the fuck, Allie, that doesn't make any fuckin' sense." Mostly I write in the moment, so the feeling and pain behind the words are raw, and I just go back later to clean up any muddiness that occurs during the ranting if that makes sense.

SilentRadiance SilentRadiance Sep 19, 2016
I love this, you do a really good job of expressing depression overall. I hope that you do find something positive to alleviate this darkness you feel in your life. Take care :).
jetblackstarshine jetblackstarshine Sep 28, 2016
This beautifully expresses things I've felt but have always had trouble saying. I love how long it is, too. I've never really been able to write long poems, but I definitely enjoy them. Your writing is amazing. Keep up the good work!
pratsandtrusts pratsandtrusts Nov 26, 2016
It's really breathtaking! I loved the way it's written... Nice poem!
naughtyharshi naughtyharshi Sep 29, 2016
I loved the way its written 
                              Hope the author is as interesting
Renkolen Renkolen Sep 18, 2016
Well nice poems but I hope this isn't how you hold yourself of the conveluted set of goals.
urocyonn urocyonn Sep 30, 2016
This is absolutely incredible, you portray exactly what I feel everyday into words and it's breathtaking to me. you are an amazing author.