Kidnapped By Tradition (Book 1)

Kidnapped By Tradition (Book 1)

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True_Original_Horror By True_Original_Horror Updated Nov 26, 2016

Tara is a 16 year old girl like a normal girl she has family issues but after one run she didn't know her life could change juristically. She is kidnaped and sold to somebody who is very close to her.

Does she fall in love with her captor and learn to live her new lavish life style or try to get away?

  • creepy
  • horror
  • kidnaped
  • love
  • lovestory
  • pain
  • romance
  • scary
  • stockholm
  • tourture
Honestly,  i think this is good so far, but you have a lot of run-on sentences.
yikes_chloe yikes_chloe Jun 06
this is awfully similar to a book by masonfitzy, kidnapped by Cannibals? I'm guessing you wanted to copy their concept to get the reads.
This is very off, you have to add WHY she decided to go through a sketchy neighborhood, otherwise something bad will happen "cuz plot," AKA it'll look very half-added. She can't just decide to for no reason. Is she taking a shortcut?
lilmelanin lilmelanin Nov 01
Did you really think he wasn't going to hurt you? Well... You were wrong. Never judge a book by its cover!
siihaaam_x siihaaam_x Jul 23
See that is where things go wrong when you read "I decided to go through a pretty sketchy neighborhood" like gurl are you stupid
Very smart *Gives reward with stupid written all over it.*
                              
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