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The Prince's Stubborn Mate

The Prince's Stubborn Mate

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littlehollyday57 By littlehollyday57 Updated 5 days ago

"I am giving you until your birthday to come to terms with the fact that I am your mate. You should also accept that you belong to me and I will mark you as soon as you come of age. I will make you my mate in every way before the new year comes. By January 1st, you will be marked, mated and you would have already conceived my child, the only thing that will be left to do is get married."

ArsaMactire ArsaMactire Sep 28, 2016
It's a very good storyline congrats on that. 
                              Just remember to review your grammar and spelling. 
                              The POV is in excellent form well done on that 
                              I enjoyed this first CHAPTER
SoullessSnowball SoullessSnowball Sep 29, 2016
Seriously??? 12 kids???( sorry, my mind can't get past that, but, great story until now...).
MindBoundBaby MindBoundBaby Sep 28, 2016
There's a game like that but with songs instead and I looooove it- In Weezy's voice from Dragon Tales
The_Guilty_Crown The_Guilty_Crown Dec 08, 2016
My parents have 12 kids I'm around middle I'm the 5th oldest
peanut458 peanut458 Sep 18, 2016
I really, like not only the story, but the concept as well. It just feels a bit, run-on. It's probably because I read it fast, but maybe you could add larger spaces between paragraphs? It might make it a bit easier to follow! Great story, can't wait to read on!